Writing Effective Sales Messages

A sales letter is a document designed to generatefeature is something the product or service
sales. It is a distinctive type of persuasive letter.already has. Benefits are what motivate people to
It persuades the reader to place an order, tobuy. Bullet point each benefit to make it easier to
request additional information, or to lend supportread. Think about every possible benefit your
to the product or service or cause being offered.reader may derive from your product or service.
For most sectors other than retail, a sales letterIn many cases, people will buy a product or
is the first and most important way of reachingservice based on only one of the benefits you list.
new customers. The purpose in writing a salesBesides the benefit stated at the letter's opening,
message is to sell a product. It influences theyou can bolster interest by adding high-profile
reader to take a specific action by making antestimonials from associates or former clients.
offer-not an announcement-to him. Sales letterTestimonials from happy customers are very
attempts to persuade readers to spend their timeuseful for this purpose, as are quotes from
and money on the value being offered. To sell,established third parties such as industry leaders
the sales letter must be specific, go to the rightor reputable specialists. Opinions, figures and
audience, appeal to the readers needs, and itindependent statistics are also likely to reinforce
must be informative.your message. Ultimate motivations are what
Before writing the sales letter you need to planpeople "really" want. The product or service is
about the type of sale campaign that you willjust a vehicle to providing these benefits so make
conduct. Whether you will send a letter only or willsure your sales letter focuses on these
you include brochures, reply forms, special inserts,motivational factors.
samples, response cards etc.? How do you plan toEstablish credibility
market the product or service? Through theYou need to establish credibility and be believable
Internet, direct mail, email, direct sales, printby the second paragraph. You must anticipate the
advertising, etc.? Do you need other advertisingreader's objections and doubts and offer counter
or literature to support the sales letter? Who isarguments. There are several ways of
your competition? How are they marketing thisovercoming reader's doubts which must be used
product or service? What is your advertisingwith good judgment and should be related with
budget? Are your marketing hopes realistic?the main appeal of the letter. You can provide
Another important decision is to determine thetestimonials, money-back guarantees, trial offers,
specific purpose of your letter. Whether you wantattractive warranties or free samples. Using too
your reader to call for a free video, presentationmany points to establish credibility will not be
or demonstration? Or you want your reader to filleffective. To gain credibility for you and your
out an order form? For these you need to knowrequest, present just one fact, strengthened, if
and analyze your audience and the purpose fornecessary, by an opinion or fact as a proof.
writing. Try to form a mental image of the typicalMotivate action
buyer for the product you wish to sell. AskIt's important to remember that people are
yourself:o Who is your prospective buyer?o Whatmotivated to buy based on their emotions and
motivates a person to buy this item?o Whatjustify their purchase based on logic only after the
might the reader want to know about thissale. This means that each step in the sales letter
product?o What does the product or service doprocess must build on the reader's emotions to a
for the one who needs it?o What can the readerpoint where they are motivated to take action.
gain from buying it?o What is unique selling pointEncourage the reader to act by an easy and clear
of the product or service?o Does your offermethod of responding. Close with summarizing the
appeal to the reader?o Can you transform himcentral selling point and clear instructions for an
from prospect to buyer?easy action to be taken. To motivate, you can
A sales letter is one of the important instrumentsoffer a gift, limit the offer, guarantee satisfaction,
of sales promotion. The principles of effectiveor promise an incentive.
sales letter depends on your communication skillEnd with an action: What result do you want from
and your ability to convince your reader to acceptyour letter? Are you looking to get a face-to-face
or act on your recommendations. You may beappointment? Are you answering questions raised
promoting a product, a service or an idea; yourat a previous meeting? Do you want to make
sales letter should catch the reader's attention,your prospect better informed? Do you need to
build interest, and motivate him to buy theget a signed contract? You need to close your
product or service offered. A good sales letterletter by requesting a specific, quantifiable action.
should possess the following qualities:For example: "I will call you on Thursday, May 18
Emphasize good looksat 10 a.m. to schedule meeting" or "Please return
Design your document for visual impact. Make itthe enclosed contract by Friday, April 21, or call
easy to navigate so your reader reaches for itme if you have any other questions".
first-ahead of the competition's. You can createWRITING A SALES LETTER:
professional-looking templates for your sales letterLike any other business letter, a sales letter has
that use your company logo, branding and colors.three parts - introduction, the body of the letter
'You' Attitudeand the concluding paragraph. Let us examine in
The most effective word in a sales letter is "you".detail how to draft these three components of a
Never begin a letter with "I" because chances aresales letter. The important thing in a sales letter is
the reader won't get to the second word. It allthe sequence which is as following:
comes down to selling benefits - your prospectsIntroduction
are not interested in the features of yourBody of the letter
products services, but in what how your productsConclusion
or services can benefit them. Then it must build aIntroduction
reader's trust. It should make generous use ofThe introductory paragraph of a sales letter
"you" and "your" - so it is clear the customer'sstarts with an opening sentence which has a vital
needs come first, not your desire to sellrole to play. In many instances, the opening
something.sentence is the only sentence that is read, so it
Use bulletsmust immediately appeal to reader's interests.
The body of your letter should contain key points,There are several ways of writing an opening
shown by bullets. Use bullets because it makessentence in a sales letter, some of them are
the letter easy to read. As the writer or seller,listed here with the examples:
you benefit by immediately pointing your reader inA provocative question: What would the leaning
the direction of the important points you want totower fall for? The leaning tower of Pisa would
make.only be put to shame by architectural splendor
Keep your letter briefthat outshines its own like the new range of
It's rare that someone is going to read anythingluxury bathroom accessories.
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ineffective letter.A striking information: We are the Number 1! We
Use statisticsare the number 1 in revenue, customer base and
Using statistics shows that you understand thecustomer satisfaction.
issues of their business, while demonstrating thatA story or an anecdote: Mr. Bala went shopping
your product or service can solve a problem. Itwith his saving with our VISA credit card. What
also gives your prospect a reason to supportwill you do with yours? Our credit card offers 5%
your product or service within the company.bonus savings on all purchases for first six
Show your prospect's needsmonths.
Your sales letter is a very brief sales proposal, soA significant fact: Hearing Loss - you may not be
you need to show that you are thinking aboutaware of... Only about 25% of people who need
your prospect's needs. You might be hesitant tohearing aid use them.
put your best ideas in your letter, fearing thatMost people have a vocabulary of 2-3,000 words
your prospect will use them but not hire yourand even a scholar uses no more then 5-6,000
company. That's a mistake. By putting your ideaswords in his daily life. But there are around
in your letter, you will make your prospects feel500,000 words in English language and you can
like they are getting something already, and thatuse many of them to enrich your vocabulary by
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More importantly, you will be demonstrating thatSplit opening: You know English, but are you quite
you are creative and have your client's bestfluent in it? It may sound incredible but classrooms
interests in mind.can't help you achieve fluency. No, they can't. No!
Use right toneNor can audio video sessions. Nor translation. But
Use the right tone in your writing. Use active'Rapid English Fluency' can help you.
voice. Use the present tense. Be positive. AvoidA conditional sequence: If home is where the
negatives. Keep sentences and paragraphs short.most number of accidents take place, think of
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Catch attentionBody of the letter
To be effective, a sales letter must catchYou may have a lead paragraph in the body of
reader's attention. Design your document forthe letter. This part of the sales letter can be
visual impact to catch the reader's attention byused to expand the promise made in the headline
using graphics such as layout, colour scheme oror used to deliver a second major benefit of the
illustrations. You can grab attention with anproduct or service. A sub-headline can also be
eye-catching headline or an interesting opening.used as the second part, to answer a question
This might be a question or statement. Theposed in the headline. For example, Part 1 could
opening should be short, honest, relevant,say: "Want to learn Kannada in 30 days?" Part 2
interesting and stimulating. Keep it quite general tocould say: "Well, here's how to . . ."
appeal to as many people as possible. There areIn the body of the sales letter you will begin to
many possibilities for opening your sales letteroffer proof. You expand the theme, fill in details,
that could persuade the reader to buy. Make aoffer proof, and show how you plan to fulfill the
compelling promise for the reader, tell a storypromise you made in the headline. Here, you give
that the reader can identify with, make andetails of your unique selling point. You continue
announcement of a new product or servicetalking about the benefits and offer proof of the
showcasing your unique selling point or ask aclaim you made early. You share the details of
question.the benefits. Prove your claim or statements by
The headline encourages your prospects and leadsfacts, logic or testimony. There are several ways
them to your next line. There you start to buildof doing so, choose one that suits your products
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intended audience. To build interest in your salesGuarantees: Guarantee of satisfaction
message you should highlight your product'sYou always come first with us and your complete
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- To get entertainment, comfort or amusementYou need to explain the qualities of your product
- To take advantage of opportunitiesand its special features and convince your reader
- To be good lookingthat your claims are true. Remember, by the end
- To achieve inner peaceof the body, the goal is to create an emotional
Show them how your product will benefit them inresponse that will cause the reader to do what
making their lives better, safer or easier. How willyou are now going to tell him to do.
it save them time, trouble, worry or money?Closing:
Look at their ultimate goal and relate it to that.In the closing part of your sales letter your goal is
Why should they buy from you?to motivate action. Recapitulate your points and
For example, state what makes you an expert inmake a final appeal. You may give a limited time
your chosen field. How can you prove what youoffer, or limited quantity offer or special bargain
are claiming is true? Once you have listed downetc. Use a Post Script. For example, "If you order
the key benefits of the service or product andbefore March 1, we will include a free . . ." Or
positioned yourself as the person to deliver it, the"Money back guaranteed . . ." Or "Discount is good
time is right to deliver your sales pitch. Persuadeuntil . . ." If you ask the reader to order, support,
your reader to buy based on the grounds ofor to contact you for the specified reason you
what the product or service does for him or hermust make it easy for him to reply. Support the
(benefit), not what the product or service issales letter with a post card or an order form. If
(feature)!appropriate, supply a toll free telephone number,
A benefit is what the product or service does,an Email link, and or your URL. Always close with
and what the buyer gains from the feature. Aa thank you and use a signature at the end of
benefit is the specific outcome of the feature. Athe letter. Save one of the best points for last.